Wednesday

I usually do not like to free write because when I am told to write I cannot think of one thing. But today was different, today was a great free writing day. Even though it was only for ten minutes, it seemed much longer and I got some good information out of my free write. I discovered that since I have been studying this subject so much recently, that when I went to write my rough draft, I left out a lot of details that are essential to my paper. These were mostly descriptive, process type of details. And since I am doing a topic that has more medical terms than normal, I saw that I need to explain these words more. Also, my order of paragraphs could be better organized to flow in a chronological order. But most of all, I found that it may be best to address my audience as if they do not know anything about pregnancy or the medical aspect that is being addressed in my paper.